Wednesday, 25 April 2012

Salesmen Abroad screenplay, update

One month into writing the screenplay for Salesmen Abroad and I'm 70 pages in - leaving 20 pages to wrap up Act III. At the moment I'm pretty happy with how it's going - the Act I break, the mid-point turn and the Act III break all come in pretty much spot on.

The characterisations are reasonably good - particularly the obnoxious and weak/boring co-workers. I'm happy that the set-up and pay-offs work, and that the through-story is strong enough to carry the film.

Let's see how the next 20 pages go.

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