Saturday, 1 September 2007

More of the Red Planet

Encouraged by the news yesterday of getting through the second round of the BSSC Comp, I decided to tidy up the first ten pages of a short (approx. 30 mins) piece I wrote a while ago in response to Adrian Mead's suggested 'Writing Package' deal.

So, late last night I began to trim the adverbs out and tighten the dialogue and scenes up. Then, after a little more tinkering this morning, I submitted this in addition to my earlier piece I sent in last week.

I know that quantity is absolutely no guarantee of quality, but I thought 'why not?'

Good luck to everyone else that's entered the Red Planet Comp, but not too much luck, eh?

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